Hi Hillary,The story you wrote didn't quite make sense. However, I liked the topic of your story.Maybe next time you could maybe thing about what's happened in the story already and where parts of it fit in.Maggie :-)
Hi Hillary,
ReplyDeleteThe story you wrote didn't quite make sense. However, I liked the topic of your story.
Maybe next time you could maybe thing about what's happened in the story already and where parts of it fit in.
Maggie :-)