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Maybe you could add more detail so that the reader gets interested in your story.From Maggie :)
Hi Hillary,Your work is very nice Hillary! You have lots of detail so that the reader knows what's around you. What type of horse was it?
It was a water horse
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ReplyDeleteMaybe you could add more detail so that the reader gets interested in your story.
ReplyDeleteFrom Maggie :)
Hi Hillary,
ReplyDeleteYour work is very nice Hillary! You have lots of detail so that the reader knows what's around you. What type of horse was it?
It was a water horse
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